Corpse Party: Blood Drive fanfic :3 *BoS Spoilers*

[Trill1996_Eric]

I'm currently writing/working on a fanfic for what happens after Book of Shadows.

When I get done with my homework (GOD, being a 10th grader isnt easy >A<) i'll type it up and post it on here~

Oh did I mention anyone can give suggestions on what to add, remove, etc?
Hope you guys like it~

Oh btw, heres the title of Ch. 1 "Hinoe and Sachiko"
Basically, this chapter is just how Hinoe was/could have actually been Sachiko, saving Ayumi just because shes a relative, and the exploding part was just to...ya know...appease her sadistic nature ^.^

Edit: Oh and it also explains how Hinoe knew about that shack/house in the woods.

[KurtExpress]

Sounds cool! I'm making one too but It's more like a new group that's trying to find their way out~ I'll make sure I'll read this!

[Trill1996_Eric]

Sounds cool! I'm making one too but It's more like a new group that's trying to find their way out~ I'll make sure I'll read this!

Hehe, thanks!~ If ya want, I could help ya with yours! I'll definately read yours dood! :3 It sounds interesting, and mine sounds bland... I mean, its a fanfic about something thats coming out eventually...so like...yeah....

[Trill1996_Eric]

Chapter 1: Hinoe and "Sachiko"
Location: Shack in the Woods
After the failed attempt at ressurecting our friend Mayu, our lives were almost claimed by the "Book of Shadows". But, to our surprise, Hinoe, Ayumi's older sister, saved us by somehow neutralizing the spell we cast. Hinoe had gone to comfort Ayumi, and when she died, Ayumi screamed, running out of the shack, like a frantic loon. This was right after Ayumi asked Hinoe "How did you know of this place, big sis?" and thats when Hinoe's head exploded. I was just as scared and surprised as she was, but I remained calm and followed her, taking one last glimpse at Mayu's bloody body as I left the shack. I caught up to Ayumi and she says "Naomi...please, come home with me." I nodded and followed her home.

Location: Ayumi's House
As we walk in the door, Ayumi tells me to sit on the couch, as she goes to prepare tea. A few moments later, I hear her screaming, and somethings' breaking. I, curiously walk into the kitchen and see Ayumi, plastered onto the wall, terrified, and immediately, I see why. Hinoe was standing right there, infront of us. Hinoe asks "What's wrong with you two? Haven't you seen me tons of times...?" Me and Ayumi tell her everything that has just transpired within the hour and she nods. "So...your saying you tried a resurrection spell on your friend "Mayu" who had died in Heavenly Host? Interesting..." Ayumi leans back and sighs as she starts to remember a glimpse from Heavenly Host.]

END of Chapter 1-Part 1

Sorry guys. I dun feel like typing much more...Maybe i'll type a bit more before I goes to bed but...we'll see.

Anyways, tell me what I can change and stuff, any typoes I mighta missed too would be nice~!
Oh and um, this version is SEVERELY different from the original. If you want the original, post here that you want it, and i'll see if I post it.
Hope you guy's enjoy! :3

PS. If you guys want, post ideas to add, and stuff. I'll also be doing wrong ends so when I post choices, i'll let you guys choose, and whichever choice has the most votes in an hour or 2 will be chosen, and if it leads to a bad/wrong end, i'll choose the other choice and continue the story. Unless you guys want me to work off wrong ends or do it PC-98 style. :3 Actually. Lets vote for that!

Vote "PC-98" if you want me to work off "wrong ends" and make it PC-98 style
Vote "BC/BoS" if you want me to just make multiple bad endings, and keep the story going like Blood Covered and Book of Shadows.

Edit: Oh yeah! Um, should I make a Seiko x Naomi in this fanfic or should I not? Dun worry, i'll keep it PG-13...

[Trill1996_Eric]

Guess i'll continue...

Chapter 1 cont.- Hinoe and "Sachiko"

Location: In front of Infirmary (Heavenly Host)
After trying to save Mayu from the 2 child ghosts, Ayumi and Yoshiki now stare at her splattered remains. Ayumi seems calm and quiet so Yoshiki starts talking to relieve the tension. "Ayumi...look...Mayu is dead. We can't change that, but we should keep strong and survive, for her!" Yoshiki touches Ayumi's shoulder and that's when she freaks. "IIIIYYYYYYYYYAAAAA!!!!! I CAN'T TAKE THIS ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!!!" Ayumi runs off toward's the restroom area. Yoshiki calls out to her "Shinoz--" BONK! Something or someone hit Yoshiki in the head, and drags him away...

Location: Restroom area (Heavenly Host)

Ayumi gets tired and takes a break, reflecting on what has happened up until this point. "Hah...Hah...Hah...Yoshiki..." She continues to pant. After she recovers, she walks into the girls restroom to see if she can wash her face to calm herself, but no water comes out of the sinks. Tired and mentally disoriented, she stares at herself in the mirror.
As she does so, she hears a scream from someone very familiar right next to her, in front of one of the stalls. "NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!". The person is sobbing deeply, and as Ayumi watches, she gets a strange feeling something very bad has happened to one of her friends, and she starts to snap as she kneels down on both knees, eyes wide, and clutching her head. "SEIKO!!!!! NOOOOOOO!! WHY?! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?! YOU WERE SO HAPPY BEFORE!!!! WHY?!" As Ayumi is being possessed by some odd spirit, she feels her self being overcome and she loses conciousness, while laughing manically and evilly.

Location: Ayumi's House
"Ayumi? Ayumiiii...? Ayumi, WAKE. UP!!" next thing Ayumi knows, Hinoe is smacking her with her hand, across the face. Ayumi stares at her bewildered. "Whew, I thought we lost you for a second..." Naomi and Hinoe usher her up. "C'mon, we're going to Heavenly Host." As Hinoe pulls out a Sachiko Ever After charm, Ayumi hesitates. "N-noo...Please...NO!!!" Ayumi steps back and Naomi forces her to take hold of the paper doll. "C'mon, please?"

Chapter 1-Part 2 END

Okay, so here's a choice part~ ^_^

Choice 1- Keep hesitating and don't allow them to go into Heavenly Host.
Choice 2- Agree to go with them into the school.

Make your choices guys!

[Sachiko]

Choice 2. Lashing serrated metals await them. Teehee~